Comments on: October Excerpt Monday

By: Felicia Holt

Felicia Holt — Sun, 18 Oct 2009 21:19:42 +0000

This is why she was a little apprehensive upon meeting him again (sep’s excerpt).

But, I’m starting to get the feeling maybe I overdid the emotions. Is it too much? Then again, it’s a bit of an all-or-nothing type of situation… Hm…

By: Alexia Reed

Alexia Reed — Sun, 18 Oct 2009 18:53:23 +0000

Oh wow this was emotional. um oh boy. He so stepped on it. lol.

By: Felicia Holt

Felicia Holt — Sat, 17 Oct 2009 10:00:51 +0000

A heroine who is turned on by being the object of a bet? I could totally get behind that. I may even have a heroine or two like that up my sleeve. Only I don’t think there are any bets in their stories. Yet anyway.

And thank you, Zora!

By: Stephanie Draven

Stephanie Draven — Thu, 15 Oct 2009 16:20:01 +0000

I was with you the whole way. But once, just once, I want to run into the heroine who is turned on by being the subject of a bet

By: Zora Stout

Zora Stout — Thu, 15 Oct 2009 13:55:59 +0000

Phew; alot of emotion for a short snippet – I love it! Good job, Felicia!

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Zora Stout » Blog Archive » Excerpt Mondays — Thu, 15 Oct 2009 04:22:05 +0000

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By: Felicia Holt

Felicia Holt — Wed, 14 Oct 2009 20:27:36 +0000

I suppose I should really have put this one up first and then the other… I do things backwards!

By: Mary Quast

Mary Quast — Wed, 14 Oct 2009 01:51:56 +0000

Nice excerpt. You’ve definately captured that “guy thing” down. Now I’m going to read the other to put them together.

By: Felicia Holt

Felicia Holt — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 05:47:30 +0000

Thank you! It’s an old piece but editing it I got pretty upset too!

By: Ella Drake

Ella Drake — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 00:20:50 +0000

What a grabber!
The emotions were so real that I got upset with her. Excellent!